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September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update!^^
I notice a few things in this chapter... Damn, is that Chaz the same Chaz Riki beat the crap out of in some deserted planet V dubbed as Hell? That was after Riki's changes in appearance, and I remember they said that that place is much worse than Ceres. Furthermore, when you mention about how Riadson's eyes color change, that reminds me of this Rio guy. Are they even the same person, or could they be related to each other? Now that I think back, that planet is used as training grounds for mercenaries... and mercenaries can always be hired as assassins. Wow.
Finally, a few developments between Gideon and Jade. Can't wait to see them consummate their bonds and give Gideon *that* new exclusive club membership. ^^ Hahaha.
I notice a few things in this chapter... Damn, is that Chaz the same Chaz Riki beat the crap out of in some deserted planet V dubbed as Hell? That was after Riki's changes in appearance, and I remember they said that that place is much worse than Ceres. Furthermore, when you mention about how Riadson's eyes color change, that reminds me of this Rio guy. Are they even the same person, or could they be related to each other? Now that I think back, that planet is used as training grounds for mercenaries... and mercenaries can always be hired as assassins. Wow.
Finally, a few developments between Gideon and Jade. Can't wait to see them consummate their bonds and give Gideon *that* new exclusive club membership. ^^ Hahaha.
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August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, go Iason, you tell Jupiter! So who is that "Latzen man" Katze is talking about?? Hmm, interesting, interesting. Awesome steamy scene between him and Raoul. Steaming up my computer screen, lol. The chase scene was great! And Riki's humor even when he was caught, haha. "You want me to keep my hands up or flash you so you'll see I'm not carrying a weapon?" Epic. Oh no! The people over in Ceres were watching, poor Riki. That must've been a bit of a shock. Ooooh, what is Sky going to do?? I am so, so, so looking forward to that chapter between Sky and Aisha now that Sky's facade is blown. Whew, I don't think they're going to be getting a vacation any time soon, huh? Maybe when everything wraps up, hmm? Loved it, as usual, and I'm definitely looking forward to the next!!!
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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it, you keep me waiting for more. Thanks for the great story
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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! Seriously, I checked every few days to see if the next chapter came out or not since the last one and today you just made my day. ^^ Thank you.
I can't wait to see the time everyone got a turn being bent over, hahaha. Sky gives me the creeps sometimes, wonder how Aisha would deal with him. And I'd like to know what happens between Gideon and Jade. Kinda miss Lily too.
Poor Riki. He had to get back sooner than he'd have expected, but if the troubles didn't follow him around, he'd cause them himself, so I guess that can't be help. And now that he has become a target, Iason might lock him at home for a long time. Lol. How he'd investigate what Norris had told him?
Really miss them in action, especially Riki's rebellious character. With all this development, I can't wait for the next chapters, but I hope you'd get the free time sooner. ^^
I can't wait to see the time everyone got a turn being bent over, hahaha. Sky gives me the creeps sometimes, wonder how Aisha would deal with him. And I'd like to know what happens between Gideon and Jade. Kinda miss Lily too.
Poor Riki. He had to get back sooner than he'd have expected, but if the troubles didn't follow him around, he'd cause them himself, so I guess that can't be help. And now that he has become a target, Iason might lock him at home for a long time. Lol. How he'd investigate what Norris had told him?
Really miss them in action, especially Riki's rebellious character. With all this development, I can't wait for the next chapters, but I hope you'd get the free time sooner. ^^
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August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
An update, finally!!!
I'm relieved that Rike was back with Iason. I'm sorry for his loss of freedom but it worried me that he's away from Iason being subject to any kinds of potential harms.
Hehe, love that Katze still slacked. It's not something we could see every chapter, not once in a while or even not ever again. The redhead beauty was such as a workaholic and I always felt kind of bad for Raoul.
It sucks that we will have to wait a few weeks before another updater is up but I hope you enjoy your break. LOL
I'm relieved that Rike was back with Iason. I'm sorry for his loss of freedom but it worried me that he's away from Iason being subject to any kinds of potential harms.
Hehe, love that Katze still slacked. It's not something we could see every chapter, not once in a while or even not ever again. The redhead beauty was such as a workaholic and I always felt kind of bad for Raoul.
It sucks that we will have to wait a few weeks before another updater is up but I hope you enjoy your break. LOL
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July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey there
I have been reading your story since the very beginning and i love every chanpter. I am currently writing a Ai no Kusabi fic on FANFICION. NET and a comment someone posted made me become aware of a little mistake on my part. And plase believe me I say I had no idea I was doing it. Apparently one of the Blondies, Mikhale Train is one of your characters, and is not from the book or the anime. I used him in my story without any knowledge of this so I am so sorry. If you don't want me to use him, I understand and will rewrite my story but if you let me continue, I will defiently give you credit for the character. Hope you arn't mad. I honestly had no idea.
please reply as soon as you can.
Lozzypoo
I have been reading your story since the very beginning and i love every chanpter. I am currently writing a Ai no Kusabi fic on FANFICION. NET and a comment someone posted made me become aware of a little mistake on my part. And plase believe me I say I had no idea I was doing it. Apparently one of the Blondies, Mikhale Train is one of your characters, and is not from the book or the anime. I used him in my story without any knowledge of this so I am so sorry. If you don't want me to use him, I understand and will rewrite my story but if you let me continue, I will defiently give you credit for the character. Hope you arn't mad. I honestly had no idea.
please reply as soon as you can.
Lozzypoo
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July 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! V finally got was coming to him. Very hot!! So ... did Iason let Riki go out because he was going to be talking to a potentially dangerous Jupiter? He's finally confronting her! Woo! Can't wait to read what happens next! Please update again soon (: (:
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July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow I'm so happy you update Forever Caged! And got a yummy scene between Oprhe and V too! All hail the cherry popping hour!^^
Is I'm not mistaken, was that Fidget who sold him out to Orphe? He had literally handed Violet's ass to the blondie minus the silver platter and ribbons. Lols. And I bet V's ass**** would look 'violet' enough on the next day. Hahaha *Shudder*
I'm kinda amused that Orphe went that far into putting the pet ring aka tracer inside V's body. Coz I think that's more Iason's way. Blondies' possessive traits sure are scary. You'd be in for a really long haul, V. Too late if you only realized it by now. ^^
Welcome to the devirginized blondies' club, Orphe. *snicker*
Wonder what Jupiter would tell Iason in the next chapters. Dare I say that the cats are almost out of the bag now?
Is I'm not mistaken, was that Fidget who sold him out to Orphe? He had literally handed Violet's ass to the blondie minus the silver platter and ribbons. Lols. And I bet V's ass**** would look 'violet' enough on the next day. Hahaha *Shudder*
I'm kinda amused that Orphe went that far into putting the pet ring aka tracer inside V's body. Coz I think that's more Iason's way. Blondies' possessive traits sure are scary. You'd be in for a really long haul, V. Too late if you only realized it by now. ^^
Welcome to the devirginized blondies' club, Orphe. *snicker*
Wonder what Jupiter would tell Iason in the next chapters. Dare I say that the cats are almost out of the bag now?
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July 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's V's turn finally. Now that Orphe had him. I had no doubt he would be insatiable just like his brothers and will take V again and again. V could be insatiable too but considering his ass was on the line...hahaha, he was in deep shit. I wonder how he's going to get back to the twins. :D
Okay, so Sky was the only one left. Wait, there was still Jade. well, the boy was so delicate and seemed so fragile. There was no way Gideon would force himself on him like his brothers did to their lovely mongrels (except Marcus). But, Jade liked him, it could be easy but also be difficult. Let's what he got.
I'm not sure how to describe Iason's move. Was it safe to go see Jupiter? Was he so sure Jupiter wouldn't hurt him? Of course, if Jupiter wanted to harm him, she could have done it easily. Then again, sometimes people (or that machine) would let the dog lie if they weren't pushed too much.
Okay, so Sky was the only one left. Wait, there was still Jade. well, the boy was so delicate and seemed so fragile. There was no way Gideon would force himself on him like his brothers did to their lovely mongrels (except Marcus). But, Jade liked him, it could be easy but also be difficult. Let's what he got.
I'm not sure how to describe Iason's move. Was it safe to go see Jupiter? Was he so sure Jupiter wouldn't hurt him? Of course, if Jupiter wanted to harm him, she could have done it easily. Then again, sometimes people (or that machine) would let the dog lie if they weren't pushed too much.
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July 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahh... had a lot to catch up on. Riki's causing trouble as always. I'm loving it. A lot's happened since I've been MIA. Glad that you've kept it up. Looking forward to the next installment again.
-Sheleeta
-Sheleeta