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Hey that was so good!
But I´m really curious how Aisha will handel Sky and if the brothers could meet regually. They so cute together.
I also would like to see how Riki kick the asses of those elites that are after him.
You keep writing, I keep reading.
Love!!

Good work on the latest chapter! Marcus was totally fooled by Fidget, and I must say, so was I until Fidget started acting like ... well, Fidget. Then I thought ... hmm, something's wrong here, lol. And of course, it was the eyedrops *smacks herself in the head* should have known, lol. I was laughing so bad at that part! Well, Riki hasn't gotten up to too much, thankfully, since he doesn't want to get his ass hauled off by Iason. Who are those three at the end? I'm thinking two of them are Jade's former master and Kirin, but who's the third person? Hmm ... a lot to look forward to! Please update soon!!!

*snicker* Marcus the Sucker got his cherry pop by Fidget, who played him by shedding croco tears (and using eye drops at that). Welcome to the devirginized Blondies club, dude ^^.

And Riki, oh I so miss the attention on his actions in FC. And you are being mean stopping when things are heating up too ^^. I can see that plots and drama are in the air. Who are the three people who had their eyes on him? Jerico, Kirin and assassin? Aww, I'm so wanna read what happens next!

Nice play, Keita. I thought he was really upset like Marcus did. I sensed something wasn't right that the boy was too eager and he didn't really resist Marcus too much. I know that why now.


Did Iason really not send anymore to keep an eye on Riki? Riki was strong but it's inevitably for the boy to not get into trouble. He could still get himself hurt however strong he was.

Hallo
I just found your story Forever Caged and I couldn't stop reading untill I was through.
A wile ago I read Taming Riki from Kira, since then I haven't found a story so captivating.
But your story is even better. (Not the handcore S&M) You're really brilliant!!!
The twins, V and their Blondeis are so cool.
Will Riki met Kirin and Jerico when he'll run around in Midas.
I'd like to see what'll happen to this bastards.
Keep writing, please.
And I think you should really end the story when the thing with Jupiter is solved.
But a sequel wouldn't hurt. A prequel wouldn't be necessary I think, almost everybody have seen Ai no kusabi, and that is the prequel. And the past of the twins sound so depressing. I don't know if I want to know more about it.
Awaiting your update.

Sweet Raoul and Katze scene, it's nice to see Katze dropped his control once in a while.

Just about time Orphe, Marcus and Aisha got to know their mongrels true name. Aww, really couldn't wait what would happen to them after this. After all the tricks the three mongrels played so far, hopefully the blondies could maintain their default dominant and seme position... or else they might be the laughingstock of Tanagura if words got around that not only they got played by their pets, they end up as submissive too? ^^

Actually, for the above wish, it's just my preference. Blondies stay seme and mongrels stay uke. Though I think I'd enjoy whatever you throw at us and never get enough on it, lol.

Yay! Bet Riki got a field day in Midas, and *may troubles follow him around* so I could read amazing action scenes in the next chapters.

Even after longer chapter you update this time, I fidget in my chair, couldn't wait for the next one to come out ^^

WOW, what Raoul said to Katze, I don't know how to describe it but it was kind of touching. It sounded like the vow in a wedding. I wish Raoul let Katze talk. I wanted to hear Katze's response to his Blondie's words of affection. Katze was so shy about his feeling. Spilling “All I do is think about you.” already made himself blushed. So adorable! LOL No wonder it drew the vow-like remark out of his Blondie.


haha, finally! The twins's real identities were blown. Not bad huh, Macus. I can't wait to see how Aisha wins Sky's heart. Sky was one little tough mongrel. He was not as innocent and kind as Fidget. Other than being agitated by Macus, I also wonder if he was a little mad that Aisha couldn't tell Fidger and him apart.


I thought V's real name would be revealed on the spot. Was Orphe able to smoke it out later?

Woo! Katze is hot stuff in that first scene, almost had to douse myself in ice water (: Annnnnnnnd ... Marcus figures out that the twins have switched on him and Aisha! Bwahaha! Thought he would. Can't wait to see where it goes from here. Fidget and Sky were sooo asking for it! Ooooh, and can't forget Sky returning to his normal self. Rather than being put off by it, though, it seems Aisha's fired up for the challenge of taming the cruel little mongrel. Looking forward to that. What's Orphe gonna do to get V to tell him his true name? Hehe, so much to look forward to in the next chapter! Darn, cliffhanger. Hmm, what's Riki going to do? Looking forward to the next chapter, as usual!!! Your story is so entertaining. Keep up the good work!

Another great chapter (: Riki so got what he deserved. But you gotta give him a little slack for his reply when Iason asked him about how it felt to kiss Lily, saying that it was Iason he was thinking of even if he can't remember. H-O-T!!!! Their little lovemaking session afterward was also sizzling. Iason's giving Riki free rein in Midas? Hmm, unexpected. No wonder Riki's suspicious. What's he gonna do with that freedom, I wonder.
So can't wait to see if V gets caught trying to switch the twins back *rubs hands together gleefully* His interaction was Orphe after waking up was awesome! Loved how the Blondie told him in no uncertain terms that he'll be fully aware of it when he takes him for the first time. Ooooh, so gave me the chills! Thanks for the update!!! Loved it, as always. Keep up the good work (: (:

Ahh... Riki and Iason hour. Not bad ^^

Though my fantasy involved Iason grabbing and molesting Riki in front of everyone and it'd be one hell of a time of awesome blondie performance, combined with Riki affecting everyone and Lily emitting arousing scent were enough to convince the rest of the Elites population to lose their virginity that very night and the party would turn to an orgy bwahahahaha, then later they'd all hail Iason as the new ruler and unite to overthrow Jupiter... *got shot by Jupiter's spy android and die*

An outing gift to Midas? I suspect that something might happen to Riki there since troubles follow him everywhere, with Jerico up to something and Kirin's unnatural interest in him (is he whom I thought he is?). You sure know how to surreptitiously develop your plots and throw the bomb in a big bang later. ^^ Even if nothing happens, it'd be good for Riki to be let loose some time. Being cooped up all the time can kill anyone, yeah?

Ahem... I wonder if Lily would get harsher treatment from Mikhail since he was the one who used his scent to calm or affect Riki's behaviour in the party. And he let Riki kissed him too. Hell if Mikhail didn't notice that.

Would Jade get some attention from Gideon in later chapters? He contributed his voice to affect Riki too. He needs to be fondled, uh no... admonished a little, rite? *batting lashes innocently*

As for Valen, whooo boy... this mongrel is soo gonna get in trouble. I wanna see a both enraged and aroused Orphe for once ^^

Hehe, hope my review won't bore you to death, coz I really wanna read the upcoming chapters. ^^