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I hope you continue this..i also hope you dont mind me writing a story about that bargin Ukyou did with Ranma...seems like a good idea to write that...message me on the forums if you agree

Hehehe, that was sweet, and I like how Yoko learned of Ranma's existence, though not of her connection to him, and how it wound up helping Mousse finally make the connection in his head. Now, to see How Ranma, Akane, and their kids react to this. I look forward to the next chapter. I notice though that you didn't mention what became of Kodachi. Japanese Arkham, perhaps? Oh, well, until next time, then. Laters.

Okay, a.)How did he figure it out?, and b.)when he's talking about her with Jack at the beginning of the chapter, Jack somehow knew she had a child without it even being mentioned, you might want to rewrite that part to fix it. Just a suggestion. All that said, another fine piece of work, if somewhat in need of a beta, and I await chapter 4. Until then. Laters.

I was just wondering that i'll never tell looks incomplete may be you should continue and numbers of hits for it is high for a 4 charter story

Hehehehe, lol! Yeah, Yoko's a little imp, alright. And they do seem to be getting caught up in each other, aren't they? It'll be interesting to see what happens next. Until chapter 3, then. Laters.

An interesting beginning, I look forward to more. Will a chance reunion with Ranma occur, by any chance? It'd be nice for Yoko to meet him, and her half-siblings. Well, until chapter 2, then. Laters.