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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nice story! i thinlk a little is missing at the end of this chapter though...
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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Most recent chapters much much better. Keep up the awesome job.
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May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16 was fantastic, favorite chapter so far, but I felt like 17 and 18 were a little lacking. Story is still great and am really looking forward to more.
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May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you could have done the Game Corner basement part a bit better. A gang-bang perhaps? Maybe in Silph Co.
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May 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Still fantastic, and the small errors you have is well worth the amazing posting rate. Kepp it coming people.
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May 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
richardthedragon again... this story is incredible at ten chapters. keep going mates
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May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story already and hope for more updates soon
Mika-Hime
Mika-Hime
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May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
About time she lost one :P Would be pretty boring if she breezed through everyone though.
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May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Idea. update soon
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May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is cool so far i like leaf having a crush on daisy oaks, and also that she won against blue although i skimmed that part lol