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I really loved this story and love the way u made light so innocent again. I really wish there were more fics like these instead of those dark depressing ones. plz carry on writing more, xx.!!

Okay, first off that was hot and very good and I kid you not Conspiracy I kept thinking that any moment now... any moment a woman would come pushing her baby carriage and the next minute you know it Light and L come from their after glow like bliss and notice a woman drowning in her own nosebleed while the baby obliviously plays with a floating butterfly above him. The image is too freaking strong in my head.

But I really do like how you including spring and in a way went full-circle by bringing up spring again and how he's like that season the most without having it sound forced at all. And awww Light kissing the sugar off L's lips gave me the warm fuzzy when he said it was how he'd like to eat his sweets, it's too cute. I wish you well on the concept and your frist person narrative is way better than mines so no worries @_@

I really loved the descriptive wording, made the scenes very colourful, just like in spring. The mood was really relaxed and thats just what i needed this early in the morning. I think Light looks good with his hair all messy but L just looks cute with that lovely pink blush on his face. I love when these two get along and despite that the lemon was really sweet. I think the story was great, nice work cos i rearely read from death note these days. 5 stars ^_^

This fic is beautiful! I could imagine this situation if Light forgot the Death Note and L didn't accuse him anymore, their bitter rivalry was over and they started working together, fell in love!! It's good to see their relationship from diffreent side, unlike those sadistic, horror, dark fanfics about them

And also I love your Light, he's so gentle and caring, just like Innocent!Light in Yotsuba Arc and I can see beauty in L from Light's perspective!! AWESOME STORY!I truly enjoyed it! 5 stars!!

Snazzy story loved the writing good to see you returning to it:)