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by Florville

person canada-on-top
schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this story, hope you update soon!
person Queeny
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, but then I realized you didn't ever exactly state what tea Ivan did drink. :'D
I was all 'Since I love Russian Caravan I'll see what this other tea is like'.
xD;;

schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I'm not used to people updating things so fast! I expected maybe one more chapter, and I got three instead! Happy day!
So, a couple things I need to special mention. The cute kiss/hug at breakfast the morning after made we feel all warm and fuzzy inside. ^-^ Just so much of a 'thank you for being you' moment! The "affectionate squeeze" part especially makes me happy, though I can't really say why...
And when Canada does start to take control there? HOT. STUFF.

And, for the record, I don't think something like this would make a good PWP anyway. Canada and Russia have too much history, individually and together, for a story like this to be simple pornz. I'm glad you are fleshing out a good plot along with the hotness. It makes for better reading. ;)
person jeazard
schedule May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I certainly did enjoy that! *_*x
Matthew is such a sweet Dom... and probably the only kind that would really work for Ivan and make him learn something about himself so that in the end the whole thing can make him feel good.

Much love!
~jea
person animekid
schedule May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
moe...russia....moe....russia.

Holyshitomgmygodmattieisontop!!!!! *faints*

And Russia is...moe...and....hotdamnthisiskinkyandhotashell *faints again*

Sorry...two hot mattie stories in a row I read today killed me. Also uke!Russia is...rare and my kink. The biggest nation being moe is like....ohhhh.

And oh man it's rare to see Mattie on top! I also love the play you use in history, canon, etc.

...f5ing this because I don't have author alert.

Wait is this going to be straight up S&M whips and cuffs and spanking and kinky because then I have official died~

If you add Russia's voice change and his kolkolkol I think I would die again. It's strange because his normal voice is fake.....*did not know that til recently*

Still good fic
person Queeny
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! More seme Canada and uke Russia. Love it already.
person Queeny
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What if Ivan wants more than seven days??? Heartbreak? D:
person Queeny
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love sexually responsible porns. <3
person Raholea
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It was an excellent appatizer! and you're perfectly right, one can write a scene like this well enough, but when you start introducing plot and backgrounds of characters and how it can influence the current situation, sometimes a little build-up is a necesity, not an option. So far you've done pretty well on the build up.. ^^

and btw, th epolar bear door to the shower makes me laugh. I live in central alaska, so while i haven't personally seen live bear (yet) much less a polar, i can only imagine and sympathize with Canada!! My dog is bad enough, a bear is infinitely worse!!
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this, utterly loving it. It would have been easy to start well and not deliver, but it is just getting better and better. Can't wait for next chapter! And hello from /y/

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