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for Dominant Nation

by Florville

schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Keep updating! I didn't read the last two chapters, even though you had been talking about them on /y/, and now I'm glad I have. But I am excited for more! Like you said, the dirtiness is just getting started!

(You favor Matthew and you're Canadian, I favor Alfred and I'm American. In Japan, they love Japan. Do you think we just naturally love our own nation more?)
person Raholea
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*squees*
ok, so i've been waiting to see how this set of scenes turned out before reviewing, i'm kinda one of those people to ignore the cliffs and wait until the scene is finished to decide if i like it or not.
and i do! i love the slow build-up, and the way canada makes sure Ivan is OK before continuing, cause really, there IS a difference between rape, sex, and makin love. *sniffles*
ok, corny stuff out of the way. Can't wait to see what you do for the more dominating stuff.. *grins ferally*
person JRKio
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Another great chapter to your awesome story! I can't wait for the next update!
person Ell
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this! It's hot, but what stands out is that you're including the trust and negotiation involved in BDSM, without it seeming tacked on. Sometimes D/S stories give me the creeps because they really don't make it clear that all parties involved actually want it that way, but you've got that nicely covered, the kink without the creep.
person lomedraug
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's me wopkater! Finally stopping on here to say how much I love this story, and I'm always happy to come home from work and find you've updated it. <3
person jeazard
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was SO beautiful.
Can't wait to see what the two will do next. =)

~jea
person jeazard
schedule May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. This is SO pretty, and I am madly in love with it.
I did NOT expect this when I started reading chapter one but the surprise was ever so pleasant.

Please do continue, it's a thing of beauty!
~jea
*who is too overwhelmed with the need to squeal mindlessly to go into you the characters are so fricking perfect and omg*
person JRKio
schedule May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I love it! Keep going!
person silentscream
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You should definitely continue. Don't be shy with making it dirty. This is fucking CANADA *DOMINATING* RUSSIA! SO much win! Please fulfill all our fantasies.
schedule May 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is good already, and has so much potential! I really hope you write more of this. And agreed, please don't be afraid to get dirty, lol. Dirty would be very nice x x x

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