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July 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow as I Clean up my Nosebleed lol
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August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it and want MORE!
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July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just love how you're doing this story! Each chapter is so hot, and I love the parts where Sara is so confident about her sex appeal (and who can blame her, she's so hot!) and Motoko's thinking to herself about how much she likes Su. This is great please keep going!
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next update. I hope it will be like all of the other's and that. So please update when you get a chance.
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July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Short but super cute and I loved how Motoko thought about Su during the chapter. Can't wait to see the next one.
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-Twisteddarkness
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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOw about Keitaro and Shinobu then Haruka and Kanako then Naru and Mei. That is the only thing I can come up with at the moment. If I come up with any other's I'll post another review for you to look at.
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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so cute and sexy. those two make a nice couple and i loved the whole chapter.
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-Twisteddarkness
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-Twisteddarkness
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June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter. So please update when you can. I have found one problem. The start of the story isn't like the rest of it. I was just pointing that out for you so you can go though and fix it later.
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. simply brilliant. i love Shinobu and this has got to be one of the cutest stories you've done with her since Shinobu's Secret.
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-Twisteddarkness
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooo nice!! Your Love Hina stuff is always great and this is no exception! I can't wait to see what else you have planned for this! If I might make a request, you often do Sara as a controlling sex dom, which is so amazingly sexy and hot I can't even describe it...I think it would be so awesome if she was like that again, only she sexually dominated Haruka, so thoroughly that Haruka became her slave overall and transferred control of Hina House to Sara! I assume this story will have her anyway, since its about lolis, so I thought I would throw that out there and see what you think. I'd LOVE to see it happen, but of course, you have the best ideas anyway, so I'll be happy with whatever you do!