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July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like what you're doing with Nabiki and Kasumi, but only if it ends with Kasumi figuring out who the "boy" is and deciding to join in on the fun anyways, especially if Ranma's somehow involved.
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July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your notion of a training session between Ranma and Ryoga. Interesting way to motivate a guy to do his best.
I appreciate the fact that the story is focused on the games that Ranma and Ryoga play. Nonetheless, hearing about Akane standing nude in the restaurant as she reflects on the memory of doing so, or remembering what she and Ukyo did to Shampoo, isn't nearly as exciting as it would be to read about the actual occurrence of those events. Ditto Nabiki giving it to Kasumi (although I suppose you could be planning to show us that in the next chapter). Reading about what happens with Ranma is great, but I also enjoy sex scenes involving the other characters. Just my two cents worth.
I'm greatly looking forward to seeing you bring the other girls into the games, and your notions of what to do with the Jusenkyo powders.
I appreciate the fact that the story is focused on the games that Ranma and Ryoga play. Nonetheless, hearing about Akane standing nude in the restaurant as she reflects on the memory of doing so, or remembering what she and Ukyo did to Shampoo, isn't nearly as exciting as it would be to read about the actual occurrence of those events. Ditto Nabiki giving it to Kasumi (although I suppose you could be planning to show us that in the next chapter). Reading about what happens with Ranma is great, but I also enjoy sex scenes involving the other characters. Just my two cents worth.
I'm greatly looking forward to seeing you bring the other girls into the games, and your notions of what to do with the Jusenkyo powders.
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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the stories I'd go back to regularly to reread the thread, both because it's so hot, and in the hopes that material had been added. Pleasepleaseplease keep adding to it!
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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Read these in Anime Addventure. Like seeing these brought out and updated. Will you be doing the Ranma/Ryouga/Nodoka episodes as well?
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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Ooh! More! Possibly skipping over the Senshi RP bit, for preference. Heck, leaving the Fiancées out of the loop entirely, given the choice.
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July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! It was a hot and facination thread on Addventure, I'm eager to see the rest of it cleaned up, polished, and presented in a more linear story format. Glad you took up this project T.H.T. ^_^
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a fun idea, can't wait what you're going to do to this new gal.
You're the champ!
Sid
You're the champ!
Sid
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I never would've imagined this combo, but it works and there are so many scenarios the three of them could manage...
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really loving your story. Where can I find your other ones? You can send me a message through the forum if you're a member. Btw, I not sure if you know, I kind of played on your role playing idea to create my new series. Not trying to promote myself, just wanted you to know and hope you don't mind. It's vastly different.
You have a real talent for writing romantic lemons and can't wait for more.
Sorry I suck at reviewing, but still, keep up the good work.
Sid
You have a real talent for writing romantic lemons and can't wait for more.
Sorry I suck at reviewing, but still, keep up the good work.
Sid