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June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Heh, "Mikado is waiting"!
Sort of like the premise that Ryouga and Ranma's fights have all been faked. It could explain a lot; like how Ryouga could be "tricked" into thinking he had a sister. Behind the scenes I'm now imagining the two having a good laugh that the others think their games are serious and discussing just how much they can get away with.
Could for instance put the traditional Ranma archs in the backdrop and give them a new perspective. The koi rod of love was no longer an accident, the braking pint training has other uses, etc. However that would only work if the rest of the cast wasn't blatantly OOC, 'course.
Anyway, liked how you contrasted Ryouga's behavior with how he really should have acted. E.g. "Out in public maybe he'd have roared with rage and set off on a mad charge, but this was in private." And that his home is a fortress, would have liked it better if Ranma had been surprised by this – I.e. having fully expected to be able to break out – and perhaps making this their first time going "that" far, then Nabiki pops in to help Ranma not realizing it was all a game (this would of course give Nabiki a heart, unlike canon Nabiki, but hey!) but when she does she suddenly wants to participate too – even if not all the way for now – which could explain Nabiki's change in behavior as the series progressed. (Come to think of it Nabiki got cold after the ice skating mach… hmm.)
Well anyway again, enjoyed the story. Thanks.
Sort of like the premise that Ryouga and Ranma's fights have all been faked. It could explain a lot; like how Ryouga could be "tricked" into thinking he had a sister. Behind the scenes I'm now imagining the two having a good laugh that the others think their games are serious and discussing just how much they can get away with.
Could for instance put the traditional Ranma archs in the backdrop and give them a new perspective. The koi rod of love was no longer an accident, the braking pint training has other uses, etc. However that would only work if the rest of the cast wasn't blatantly OOC, 'course.
Anyway, liked how you contrasted Ryouga's behavior with how he really should have acted. E.g. "Out in public maybe he'd have roared with rage and set off on a mad charge, but this was in private." And that his home is a fortress, would have liked it better if Ranma had been surprised by this – I.e. having fully expected to be able to break out – and perhaps making this their first time going "that" far, then Nabiki pops in to help Ranma not realizing it was all a game (this would of course give Nabiki a heart, unlike canon Nabiki, but hey!) but when she does she suddenly wants to participate too – even if not all the way for now – which could explain Nabiki's change in behavior as the series progressed. (Come to think of it Nabiki got cold after the ice skating mach… hmm.)
Well anyway again, enjoyed the story. Thanks.
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June 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Faking it is back! And being tightened up and all! If this is a success, is there any chance of Ranma Does Nerima & even *gasp* Akane-kun getting some love?
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is getting interesting I can't wait to see what else you do.
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story! it's cute and yet it makes me wish Ranma could love Ryoga in the sense Ryoga wants.
You have a few errors here and there, but this is a sexy story. So, it's understandable.
You have a few errors here and there, but this is a sexy story. So, it's understandable.
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June 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving this can't wait for more, you're quite the writer. I like that is not only a well written lemon but a love story too.
More please!
Sid
More please!
Sid
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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was always one of my favorite story arcs. Glad to see it getting a new life.
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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Huh, interesting, didn't realize that you posted this here. So... Please update, this is pretty good.