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Ha~!

I like the last part~^^!

Hee~^^!

I hope there's more~! :D

Just found these stories you guys have written, and I'm really glad. This category doesn't get nearly enough love, so thank you for writing and posting. I'm looking forward to whatever you post next.

Very Nice! I like that you keep the enviorment real and grounded in the story like mentioning the parking brake and her hands below the windshield wipers. The mix of internal thought with physical action is great and I like how he secretly likes her wacking him upside the head:P The sweet couple part at the end was a nice finish.