rate_review Reviews

You have no idea how incredibly hot this fic is. Very well written, and the passion was built up very beautifully.

Very sexy fic, I love it! Cool Arthur is one of my major hot spots, especially if fancy clothes are thrown into the mix. Bootlicking is just... unff, so unbelievably sexy. And a riding crop... You have so many of the things I love all in one fic. Submissive Francis begging to suck Arthur off was unbelievably sexy, too.

Just a small note about the French in one part, as I've been studying it a bit... For the line "Je suis desolee, je ne parle pas Anglais." Because France is a male, "desolee" would only have one E, and since the French rules of capitalization are different than English ones, "Anglais" wouldn't be capitalized. Things like place names (i.e. Angleterre) are capitalized, but things like languages aren't. So, français instead of Français, anglais instead of Anglais, etc.

But don't mind my nitpicking. It's still a wonderful story. =) Very hot, and the characterization is brilliant. The dialogue exchange at the end is especially awesome. I'd love to see more like this!

This story is incredibly sexy, and extremely well-written. I love how you bring every sexy image alive, so sure to focus on all the alluring visuals. The thought of Arthur in black leather pants and boots is drool-worthy, and your characterization of Francis felt very real to me. Once again - so sexy!
This seems to be your only APH story, but I hope you put up more in the near future...