rate_review Reviews

I really enjoy your fanfic :) It just totally pulls you in and you have such great visuals that a movie plays in my head :) There's a lot of typos and spelling errors. I've learned to not let myself be bothered so much by it over the years :) I'm rather OCD about correct grammar and punctuation :) You mentioned college in one of your notes? Where are you going and studying? And is this story going to be continued anymore? I really don't like how they don't have dates on this website.

Oh my god! This is so wrong on so many levels lol oooh is Tyki and Cross gonna show? hahahaha this is gonna be so funny!

I love this story, but I would like to see Kanda and Allen end up together. I think if Kanda got his head out of his ass they would be the best couple. Opposites do attract. His best friend could have an affair with another girl where I could see Kanda settling down with Allen when it came down to it.

I want to read more! This is really well written and I have been hoping you'd continue writing it. Please tell me you plan to finish it?

Oh my god! I have been trying to find this story again after reading it a while back. Couldn't find it and then BAM! I love the awkward moments between everyone and Allen-chaaaaan! <3 YOur writing style is very likable and enjoyable. When will you upload the next chapter? Been dying to know what happens next!!!! *eagerface*

Man, I love this story, but Allen's a SLUT!!! That's ok though, because she makes a good slut. But still, not telling Kanda before she went there was just a bit much! I mean, yeah, he's got a sword, but this is Allen! Who does chair-push-ups and has a giant claw-hand! I know she just lost them, but she should grow some balls! Hahahahahaaaaa bad joke. God that was hot. But I'm surprised that you haven't gone into some of Allen's inner musings on the changes in her body, or some personal experimentation of her own. I mean come on: she was just recently a (virgin) guy, and there is now a female body at her disposal! It seems, however, that you stay strictly in the narrative, and with two or more people present at all times. So I suppose it isn't too disappointing. Looking forward to more! I want to see Lenalee's reaction now, but I'm not looking forward to the damage control that will have been necessitated by Allen's decision not to be forthcoming with Kanda concerning her relationship with Lavi. And none of these people have set any type of definition to their relationships! Exclusive? Impulsive? What's the deal, Kanda? Read you later!!

Chapter 4 was so hot *q*
I hope you will soon update again and I´m
so happy that this is Laven (atleast I hope it will end with this
pairing)

I like your story so far =) I read
the other on on fanfiction.net but I like the more
adult version of this ^^
But I can´t see chapter 2! I only see the author notes.

Ooooo.
i like it.
i cant wait for more.
update soon.
XD.

~Golden Kitsune~