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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Why'd you have to make this so short. I loved this story. XD
also I pretty much made Umari although it's not really legitimate cause of Flare Blitz XD
I can give you her if you want XD.
also I pretty much made Umari although it's not really legitimate cause of Flare Blitz XD
I can give you her if you want XD.
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Quite a ride, I had rather grim satisfaction at Umari contemplating burning down the house in response to Allan's behavior, but that still would have been bad, even if he had indeed hated her instead of loving. The mega arguments in Chapter 2 were interesting to read, and the general angst in 1 was depressing as it should be. This will be a neat meet in The Dark Type, so good luck with that coming. +++++
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is AMAZING and very well-written! I love Umari, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
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July 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This makes me want more dark type.
quotes as
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Somebody's getting a shot at the Solon.
I'd like to see more. You are aware, though, that Ch. 29 of Equilibrium takes place on about July 28?
I'd like to see more. You are aware, though, that Ch. 29 of Equilibrium takes place on about July 28?
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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
your writing stiyel seems to be difernt in this story but that is to be expeted in a shorter story over all its a good story so far and im looking forward to the rest of it
(im sory for any and all speling errs im bad a speling very bad sory)
(im sory for any and all speling errs im bad a speling very bad sory)