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by cdreaiton

schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
though it was important to the story, I dont think Kurogane would have been able to keep his sword in that prison cell. Surely the guards would have taken it away >.>
Either way, I'm glad Fai was finally able to do something! =D Such a sweet ending!
schedule December 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! I get to read 2 chapters in one day =D yay!

And what's with that "TBC?". I think there can be more done to end this series.
I think the culprits should be caught and dealt with and Kuro and Fais relationship to be solidified a bit more. Maybe not completely, but for them to be more accepting and open with eachother. That would be a nice ending =)
person Nesha85
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I really want to see what happens to Fay and Kuro-pu. Thank you.
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another wonderful chapter! what will they do now...? :,(
schedule November 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering how Kurogane got in contact with the Witch.
Nice to see the events from before from Kuros P.O.V.
It builds up nice suspense for the events to follow =)
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is really quite a great piece of work! I hope you continue it soon, because, like everyone else reading it, I wish to know how Kurogane got the stone (I have my guesses (; ), and how they even got him. Yay for suspense!
person Nesha85
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god pleae write more. I just can not wait to see what happens next.
The only bad part is that the chapters are kind of short. If the chapters
could be longer, that woould be great.
person LadyCera
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Indeed! Plot twist... Yikes! I wonder how that happened. Good to see he got a good beating though, heh heh heh. I am kinda curious about the price though. Nice job on the descriptive in Ch8, very good job with his fuzzy state of mind. can't wait to see what you give us next. :}
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
POOR FAI! Update soon! I'm curious on what Kuro had to give up and how they got him.
schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WHAT HAPPENED?!?!?!!?! OMG, SERIOUSLY!? What is this twist??!?!?!

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