rate_review Reviews

Finally! A May x Dawn fic ^^ I always thought those two were too friendly to be 'just friends' ^^ Anyway, very cute and fitting for Dawn to be so curious about the female body, and who better than May to satisfy her burning curiosity? and it was also lovely how they gradually went from exploring each other's clothes to exploring each other's bodies, to something a tad further beyond XD and better yet, how smoothly and appropriately you made the transitions.

Loved this story, extremely hot. All the girl talk made it believable (as far as porn goes) and was still teasingly erotic. Time to go read Bi Brunettes!

I just wanna let you know, I love this story.
I enjoyed reading it alot.
If you keep writing yuri pokemon, I'll definitely keep reading.
Stay cool.
~Ciao.