rate_review Reviews

I found this because someone roleplaying in the Hetalia community on Facebook just recommended this fiction earlier tonight in the feed. You do a wonderful job of keeping the characters "in character" -- and I loved your part for Ivan as well as well as how you have protrayed Francis. Please, continue -- I, like Arthur, would like to see what is in store for him inside this exclusive, by invitation only "club".

Please, you need to update this story!! I have become infactuated with your way of writing - you have completely drawn me in to the story and how you've set each character up.

PLEASE update - I need to know what happens next

Thanks ~

Sarah

Oh my goodness, I've never read such an eloquent fanfiction in my entire life! I'm truly captivated by this world you have created and your writing style! My heart has skipped many beats while reading this, and I cannot wait for another update!

I really love this story! ^^ The first chaptered one I've felt the urge to read in a very long time!
I hope you will continue soon! :D

ahh, this was good! do update soon! can't wait to see what francis has up his sleeve lol.

Love the series so far. It's not so mushy that you gag, but you can't help but feel bad for Arthur at times. And bringing in Francis like that was perfect! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Definitely enjoying the story so far, hope to see more of this! =D

You write them beautifully, perfectly in character and working within your AU.
Can't wait too meet Francis as well. =)

~jea

I'm definitely enjoying this story so far. I really find myself being caught up in the world that you're creating and I love the details that you add which flesh everything out so beautifully and make the setting come alive. I appreciate the history that you've given each character to seamlessly integrate them into this world while still retaining the identity that makes them an identifiable Hetalia character. The time and thought that you've put into this definitely shows through. I look forward to reading more updates because you're a marvelous story teller!

nice beginning! I wonder what's going to happen when he mets Francis though, who is going to put his whole life into a loop X)

Man I wish this had ff.net updates because I dunno when this will update unless I occasionally check it .-. I really enjoy it so far

fardect many what? Francis' roses? -.-; man I hate recaptcha....