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very pleased to review. I would request slightly longer chapters. just when you feel you have a chance to get into it ....its over. kind of like a guy that finishes before you have chance to. Otherwise I love the idea. I hope there are enough reviews to continue.

five reviews? why so few? sure it was a little short but It was a classic scene that actually could have happened except it wouldn't be as limony.

More, please.

would have preferred if they started teasing her orally first---that would have been closer to what she did to them...and would have liked them to involve some sort of candy.....would love to see a Mori/Haruhi pairing....

THIS STORY IS AWESOME PLEASE CONTINUE

LIKE LIKE LIKE!!!

oh wow, yea I really can't wait to read the rest so as soon as you can please post. Oh and could you do a threesome of Mori,Haruhi, and Kyouya. POST SOON!!

hmm i think you have a great story here keep it up, and your planned pairings are brilliant keep up the good work can't wait to read more

Writing threesomes can be tricky and though the idea of the three of them is hot, it could have used some more descriptiveness. I also don't mind double-penetration because unlike one of your reviewers, it IS possible, just a bit too much for the 'first time'. People have to be prepped big time (in other words: have practice in both... ahem... body parts) before going into a first actual double-penetration, otherwise it would be too uncomfortable to actually be arousing. (just some facts) Don't ask me how I know this! *blushes* But I've written way too much smut for my own good. And I would like to see a round 2. =)

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