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You know, I was just going to navigate away from the page and not say anything, but I can't help it. I have to at least politely point out that if Haruhi and the twins were to have a three-way, there is no human way possible that they could both be in her at the same time. Not only is it kind of a disgusting thought, the body wouldn't be able to handle the pressure and it would probably kill her. The body can only stretch so much, and I just can't see this happening.I'm not trying to be mean or tear you down for it, but I would suggest if you want more readers I would try to keep that sort of thing out of your fan fiction. Thank you.

I like please keep writing!!

Definately a good start... Kyouya is my favourite to be paired with Haruhi besides the twins, but I wouldn't say no to some mori either.. ;P

Wow! This was a nice and yummy start. Please continue.

Kyoya!

Mmm, definitely worth another chapter! That was good, though it could have been a little longer. Can't wait to see an update.