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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This isn't the end is it? Moar.
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June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
not bad. not bad at all! the grammer drove me a little nuts (capital letters belong at the begining of sentences and for proper nouns only...), and the premise was a bit unbelievable, but the characterization of the situation was pretty good, and the scene was fantastic! can't wait to read more! :)
~Nev
~Nev