rate_review Reviews

So many cool things in this story: the surveillance, the embarassment, B being the bottom, and the rare pairing. Good work!

wow. that was an amazing story. though it seemed unfinished maybe another chapter? and if it IS unfinished well continue! great story!

Busyhead highthing... I adored this story! I especially liked how Light's dad was going pale (a very natrual reaction, but it made me smile nonetheless.) Fights as foreplay... I've only read four fics with this pairing so I can't say if this is common in this pairing, but I've never seen it in other fanfics either. Intresting with Beyond being the bottom... okay, I loved all of it, really. I hope that counts.