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This fic is so damn engaging... I seriously hope it's not a deadfic, but it looks that way...

Please update soon. It's a really good fic.

this is an amazing and tantalizing story. you have captivated me and i can't wait for more.

You need to post more of this story now.
Like now.
Right now.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, thus far. I had a little difficulty processing all the info. that Ken's Uncle was giving off when we came to the chapter before the UGL began. That little bit seemed a tad rushed and sort of...offset the pace altogether. The rest of the story, however, is moving brilliantly. I especially enjoyed how you managed to squeak in that little breakfast scene before the UGL challenge began. That added an incredible touch to the relationship. Made me think of a part in a song I remember listening to about how the Girlfriend/wife wanted to do something nice and almost wanted to burst into tears because nothing went right and the Boyfriend/husband just grabbed her and wanted to laugh but chose to comfort her with a small embrace...anyway, I personally loved that little scene you conjured up.

As far as characters, I like how each has their own personality in check. It splashes different bits of color into the story, along with the humor you put into this. I can't say exactly the last time I remember laughing as much as I did after reading your fic., but your fic. certainly allowed me some comic relief. I guess considering I can sort of somewhat relate to some of the joking, messing around with friends and what have ya, your story sort of touches me a bit. :-p

PLEASE, keep this up. I really look forward to your future updates.

~Silentwriter

You probably got taken off because you don't have a disclaimer, one of those "I don't own pokemon" things.

well this is my ferst time seeing your story but iv herd a lot about it and after at lest 1 hour of looking thow all the pokemon storys looking for it im glad i fainly fond it on the front page no less sucks thay delted your story and i hope to see up dates soon by the way all the hipe i herd about your story was well ernd very good.

9sory about all the speling and gramer mistakes i try my best)

Sigh. For a second there, it looked like this had updated :C

Why is it bumped?

Ah. Read the repost note.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Im happy that your fic is back up again. i was thinking that i may never see it again but im glad that its back and i cant for the next update when it comes. I realy enjoy reading its a good fic. Until the next chapter. This is the first time i ever reviewed a fic on here.