rate_review Reviews

I like, wright more!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hmm...

Well, it was well written, but that fact made me rather dislike what happened. Normally I'd go into one of these stories and my brain would sort of go along with it, but other stories I've read always, always have the option for the slave-to-be to not have that position, if they desperately don't want to be in it. Jasmine's backstory here implies that she already has commitments to Whitney and to her own girls at her own gym, and in part that seems to be why she fought hard for much longer than the usual for this sort of fic. So while it was well written as an adult fic, I wasn't able to play to it, because this wasn't a mistress revealing the desires of a submissive, it was a woman forcing another woman into subjugation and basically tearing apart all of her connections to any other aspect of her life (such as making her give up the gym and thus her girls). It felt more like a medieval rape/pillage/conquest than a discovery fic like. Having a friend in real life who is a mistress and has one submissive girlfriend herself, I asked her to read this as well, and while she said that the mentality made sense, she felt the same way I did about the lack of a final choice.

This is only my opinion in the end of course. The fic is well written, well detailed, and well planned. But it was a lot darker than I expected, a lot more mean hearted, and in the end it wasn't enjoyable. Poor Jasmine.

This was good i've gotten so used to doing so much pokemon yuri with Jasime as Clair's mistress that seeing some doing it the other way around was a nice change of pace looking forward to more after all there is so little yuri here that nearly all of it is my stuff.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Very nice and sensual story.

Kind of hot but its way better if Jasmine is dom