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I loved it but it is so sad. I knew you said it would be.. and it actually turned out happier than I thought but still it saddens me.

Thank you for writing!

OMG, that was one of the best Kuroshitsuji fics that I have ever read. T_T That ending...it was PERFECT. It closed everything off nicely, but was still open enough to continue onto a sequel if you wanted to. You are going to do one, right? ;D

Sad ending, although Alastair will still be able to watch over his son and lover from a distance. But we were warned. He really got a harsh punishment, though, to have his life stolen like that...
I really enjoyed your story anyway, and hope you might be interested in writing another story for Kuroshitsuji in the future. I would love to see a continuation of this story where Ciel might finally learn the truth... If you ever get the inspiration for it. :)

OMG!!!! TTT_TTTT
Let me cry for an hour...or maybe more...
Poor Undertaker! Really...sniff...sniff...very sad...
I would like to read about the reunion between Undertaker and Ciel in the future...you know, when Ciel is already master of Sebastian, but hey! I suppose that will be ever more cruel for the poor man...

Some sexual tension between Vincent and Alastair finally resolved! I really enjoyed this new chapter, and am looking forward to the mpreg mentioned in the warnings, and how the two main characters will deal with it.
Vincent's thoughts do keep being focused on his new lover, don't they? :)
Also, Kuroshitsuji doesn't have a happily ever after ending anyway, so I'm sure fans (including me) can understand if this story doesn't either. Particularly if you want to keep parts of the canon storyline...

Well...about that of the "happily ever after end"...kind of evident...i mean: look a the end of the anime!!! Ok...just forget that...-_-'''
Anyway...even if that is the case, just hope to enjoy a little bit more of Vincent/Allegro in the future, before the sadly end...
Maybe a bit of jelousy from allegros part...? jijijijijijijiiiji

Hey you!
Thanks for the new chapter. Sooo...they finally apear; i mean Rachel and Angelina....but Vincent definitively isn't a little bit interested in neither of them...just Allegro...allegro...allegro....jijijijijiji >///<
Hope to read you soon.

Yay, another chapter again!
I really liked it too, still as well written as before. So Rachel and Angelina appear... But Vincent can only think about Alastair. I wonder if the latter will make a move on him the moment they find themselves alone in the Phamtomhive estate. Maybe just for the fun of shocking him and see his reaction. :) Poor Vincent is already frustrated (and in denial) enough, so Alastair could have mercy on him...
Also, funny hint to a potential future: "There was no person on the earth capable of handling his duties as well as Tanaka. It would take a demon to keep up with him." Indeed, it would. ;)

Wow! That was amazing! I almost cry when i found out there wasn't a "Next chapter" link...T-T
Allow me to congratulate you, for this fic. The history is very original and well development.
Hope to read chapter 3 soon!
Bye!

No, don't leave it at that! Your story is still as fascinating as before and I can't wait to read the following chapter...
It's funny too: I was just thinking that Undertaker's scars were not mentioned, but now it's done!
Will Vincent and Alastair's relationship become more steamy soon? And I liked that Vincent imagined Alastair when Michael was kissing him. The temptation should be too strong for him now... (hopefully!)