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Yay, you wrote another mpreg Kuroshitsuji story! The beginning looks very promising too, I'm already really intrigued about the following chapters - are there going to be many more? Also, an unusual pairing, but ideal in a way because we don't know much about Vincent Phantomhive (at least in the anime) and Undertaker is always very mysterious, so it gives you a lot of liberty to write them as you like without offending purists. Although I don't think you need to add "supernatural beings" to your warnings for a Kuroshitsuji fic, even if it's AR. :) Besides that you still write very well, with good characterisation and plot development. I hope that the next chapter will have more sexual tension between Vincent and Undertaker (loved the horses/buttocks veiled innuendo, by the way!), while still delving further into the plot...