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September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's pretty good. I enjoyed the sexual tension. There are a few grammatical errors present that can be quickly fixed, such as "his wryly grin" should be "his wry grin." Things of that nature.
Good stuff though. I love Mugen and Fuu.
Good stuff though. I love Mugen and Fuu.
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December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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