rate_review Reviews

Oh my God I think I have found my favorite OHC story. Amazing!

You are just such an amazing author. I love the emotional depth you put in this, and the accurate portrayal of the characters. Like the cookie jar metaphor, for example, I feel like you really mastered all the emotions of the characters. It's hard to describe. You're just really, really good.

;A; Well, I have several things to say.

A) I was literally crying when Mori just got up and left Honey there. Holy crap, I feel like there should be another chapter providing some form of closure.

B) Oh my god, you are an amazing writer. I loved it! This story was so well-written, and the characters are developed so well! I wanted to punch Kyoya for what he did to Honey and punch Honey for being a spoiled little whore at the same time!

C) I totally think you should write a story about Kyoya punishing Tamaki for letting himself get taken by Honey. That would be hot as HELL.

And that is all I have to say.
~Franky

This ending has me thoroughly depressed. Which is fitting. It's the perfect ending for this story. But wow... poor Honey. Poor Mori. Gah! I feel so sorry for them all! You have an amazing knack for analyzing the characters and keeping them perfectly in-character as you write. It's so rare. Especially in this sort of story, and especially with Honey as the main character in this sort of story. I never thought I could read Honey as a sexual being, but you show how he struggles between the childish cuteness and his teenage body's baser desires. Their reactions were all so realistic.

I think Mori will come back. He needs time to process and they do need to work on their communication, but I don't think he can stay away from Honey for too long. I see this more as a budding relationship, with Honey seeking out others when the relationship doesn't go the way he wanted, rather than a long-established relationship with Honey cheating. It's the only way I can see Honey going to the others the way he does. And if that's the case, then I can see Mori coming back. I have to, because the idea of them having this rift between them forever just breaks my heart.

Why aren't people reviewing?! Gah! I loved this story. There was descriptiveness and a sense of drama. I have a thing with endings such as the one that you gave so all in all, I loved all of this. =)

loves it continue. poor mitsukni poor takashi poor tamaki love em and u