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poor ciel! his victorian mind about sex & a vdery sexy demon living with him who knows just how to tempt!

love this!! it is a very dangerous game that both are playing-& both "men" hate to lose

Please continue!!! I'm awaiting the next chapter!

Oh my god!!!

I was just reading this through yesterday! And I was thinking, what was really that fantastic fic that is not a shotacon, Sebastian is more than a little taunting, Ciel is an hormonal teenager almost in maturity age?...

Oh, the slap was a great touch certainly, but I went crazy when dear old Undertaker commented the fact...

And you remembered me! I want to thank you so much for remembering to mail me, and just ask to do it once more, please? (It’s just so hard to keep track of fics in AdultFanfiction dot Net, I much prefer Fanfiiction dot Net), I would really love to read more of this ^^

Good luck with your life in between the chapters. Kisses and I'll see you later!

PS: oh yes, did I already mentioned I ADORED your image from your profile? The "attempting to give a damn" icon? ingenious, I want one too!!!

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!!!???

PLEASE!!

lol.. I love so far!

Oh my god. Ciel has grown up! (And I can't take the image of his father, with genetics like that... It sure as hell and demon Sebastian that he looks amazing)

Adored the way you characterized Elizabeth's relationship with Ciel and the pent-up, lusting ways of Sebastiand and the Young Master.

Please, please, please, could you email me when you do update? jubblesbubbles@hotmail.com, thanks!

kisses

Love this story so far and I can't wait to see how it pans out ^_^

I like the play of words that you use and it is written quite nicely with them. I can definitely feel the British culture and the small mention of Christian dogma though I have to point out you made a mistake in it. It was a THIRD of the angels that fell from Heaven and not a half, it is stated quite clearly in the Bible and I thought I would point it out since you seem to aim for it to be realistic in your story from what I have read. I also wished you were descriptive with the food they ate in the second chapter, it would have helped, I think your refusal in including it and left it VERY vague really didn't help you. Other than that I have to say I enjoyed the story thus far and look forward for the next one. :3 Good luck~

I thought FF let authors put explicit content as long as the author put clear warnings at the beginning of the chapter? ...though my knowledge about that site might be old (rules wise that is). Ah well, I'll try to keep up with it on AFF then. There is a site that you might want to look into for posting (or hell, just looking at it! ;D )

yaoi.y-gallery. net

Mostly an art site but they consider writing a art. If you've been there you know why it's so great; if you haven't it's defiantly a place to check out! ...it's not work safe however~ :D

ANYway! ...*pouts* I hate cliffhangers. But at least they kissed! :D I'll be lookin' forward to the next installment! ^_^

So far this is looking good! And the promise of a uke!Sebby sound fabulous~! =D I'm looking forward for more!

Question though...do you post on FF.net? I'd like to keep better track of your story!