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July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
10/10 It's somewhat rare for an erotica to have an excellent plot and great sex, and you pulled it off! And the ending... beautiful!
However, I must say you used "she" way too much to begin your sentences. Try mixing and matching next time.
However, I must say you used "she" way too much to begin your sentences. Try mixing and matching next time.