rate_review Reviews

This was just great. There aren't near enough of this pairing, and one would expect that they'd be pretty damn popular. They're both just delicious, after all. The situation is perfect for a one-shot: nice and simple, with an end that lets you know that more of the same will go on in the future. The quintessential slice-of-life style one-shot. Of course, there's more to it than that - the craziness of the two involved makes the word 'typical' sound silly, and you also had some really good ideas. I especially liked her handling of his screw (the one on his head is what I'm currently referring to), and also the cabinet. I liked that a lot.

Keep up the good work! Don't let creativity die after just one great story! Feed the masses!

Thanks,
klv
LJ: the-klv-kid