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for Falling for the First Time

by AndrewJoshuaTalon

person Anon
schedule April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good stuff.

pak40
person Jocko
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Mr. Talon,

I don't know anything about Ranma except for the basic plot synopsis and I'm probably not the most loyal or knowledgeable Love Hina fan, but I really dug this. The interaction between Shampoo and Keitaro was, well, really cute and warm.

And anything with Motoko and Keitaro training together is added hotness. You did fairly well with that too.

If you plan on adding anything more to this, I will read it. :)

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