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for Sweet Deception

by Auska

person guest
schedule November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
No offence but your precious Demon is more of an annoyance (perhaps a bit Gary-sue as well given he's apparently 'better than all' lol) than an asset to this story. You'd have been better off making a plot with the characters that already exist.
person Cult Grade Koolaid
schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ROTFLMFAO! This story is hilarious! I love your OC, he's so unique! Well, compared to the other OCs that appear in stories. They're usually somehow related to one of the characters. But I like this one. He's adorable, in the 'I can fuck you up seven ways from Sunday' way. I can't wait to read more of it. I was upset to only see two chapters. But I do hope that you update soon!

CGK

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