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THis story was AMAZING!. I am glad to have read it

This story was AMAZING. There were parts where I almost cried, laughed my ass off, worried for everyone and trembled with anticipation. You are a great writer. Your intimate scenes are very detailed and well written. I couldn't stop reading. One of the best I have seen.

I must admit, before I read this, I was not a fan of France-Britain love, and I honestly thought Russia-America was just a little weird. But they are now totally two of my fave couples.

You, my dear author, are a drug peddler, and this story is the drug. It took me a few days but I devoured it all. It's like I couldn't pry my eyes away from the fucking screen. I'd keep telling myself, "just one more chapter, then I'll go to sleep". Five chapters and several hours later, the morning sun still finds me with my eyes glued to my laptop. You've created a story with such depth and purpose, and your writing style is delightfully engaging. Though I admittedly had to use the google machine for a few mentioned medieval clothing, but that's not a complaint. I learned new things, and that's awesome.

You have truly created a fan worthy fiction, and, as a result, have gained a follower. Me. I more than look forward to the chapters to come. Bravo.

I had a few problems with some of the logistics... like, when the city was going to be attacked, Ivan brought only a few of his servants with him... including Kiku (why not other servants... and why bring a gardener?) I also have a bit of a hard time seeing Ivan continually let Arthur be around if he had that much of a problem with him.

But, oh my god! I love this fanfic!!!! The sex scenes are HAWT... and as much as I want to punch Ivan in the face, I really love his character. Arthur's character is a close second. Please keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

First of all, I'm sorry you have been sick. D: I hope you get better soon.

Now, WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! ;A; that makes me sad that Arthur agreed to marry Francis, but happy at the same time. I was still hoping that Arthur would be able to get back with Alfred at some point. Guh.... but I am happy that Arthur can be happy with Francis. This chapter made me sad though because Ivan seemed to be spending a whole bunch more time with Yao than Alfred. I admit, I'm really not fond of Yao at all. He's grown on me a little since he's started being nicer, but I still kinda hate him.... taking Ivan's time away from Alfred. D: I can't wait for the next chapter! Get well soon!

I laughed so much in this chapter. Everything was so happy and fun, and god Francis and those bright red pants. I hope Arthur is doing okay, we didn't hear much about him this chapter. Way to go Francis showing Gilbert a thing or two by the way! Yay for defending Arthur's honor!!!! That sex scene was HAWT Too. God I love this story so much... MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

OMFG BKRHEIHFENFKLDSHILFDHSIHFEKLND?>AS K:LAk:lfkgsklj dk:lwkh gfkjp:ldskbgds I HATE YOU SO MUCH IVAN. YOU ARE A BASTARD, IF I WERE A BIG SCARY MAN I WOULD COME BEAT YOUR ASS TO A BLOODY PULP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

God. I would soooooooooo like to kick his ass right now. On one hand I hope that is poor little mattie's scream. On the other, I hope gilbert saved him. GOD I CAN"T DECIDE. I am happy that Alfred and Arthur got to be together. I wish Arthur would have cuddled him though... GUH ;A; you have me hooked. Please keep writing. I really want to know what happens next. And if you have the time, read my fic, Lonely Sunday. I'd appreciate it much <3

Oh my gosh. I almost started crying during the wedding. STUPID ARTHUR!!!!!! Gah it makes me so sad for him. I want him and Alfred to get together D: Alfred that's not a smart idea running off the day after your wedding! I hope Ivan doesn't get too mad... I would hate to have to hate him D:

Great Update! I love your story, keep the updates coming!

Wow. It took me a few days, but your story is amazing. I can't wait for more. I was telling all my friends that love hetalia about it to so they can read it. Oh my goodness. I just love the way your story is playing out. But I can't quite put my finger on what's going to happen. I can usually tell in stories like this whether a certain event is going to happen. The thing that is nagging me the most is that i can't figure out whether Arthur is going to act on his feelings, or at least tell Alfred, or vice versa. And I don't know whether i want him to or not. I'm getting this slightly dreadful feeling from the wedding thoughts, but I don't know if I want Alfred to be truly happy with Ivan, or run away with Arthur. I'm sure Francis would be very upset if the latter happened... Maybe he could run away with them too.

And where are the other two from the farm D: I'm worried about them....

Very awesome updates, I can't wait to get the two sisters into the story. :3 Looking foward for the next update!