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by kre8tive

person SP777
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

Whooaaa!!! O_O

Now, that was a chapter worth praise! :-)
You definitely upped the ante on this one, I really
liked the direction you went AND the ninjas are a
nice touch as well.

I can tell u were inspired by something to write
it like this. :-)
person axlyles
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You can really hear the dramatic musical background. (DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!) Can't wait for the next chapter.
person SParker
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #8...

Yes, indeed...this is definitely picking
up on the suspense AND you took an unexpected
turn in your storytelling, which is always good.

Always keep your readers guessing. :-)
person KP
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a awesome story. R u gonna make another several chapters?
person snowlynx
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it! More more MORE!

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