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July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #10...
Whooaaa!!! O_O
Now, that was a chapter worth praise! :-)
You definitely upped the ante on this one, I really
liked the direction you went AND the ninjas are a
nice touch as well.
I can tell u were inspired by something to write
it like this. :-)
Whooaaa!!! O_O
Now, that was a chapter worth praise! :-)
You definitely upped the ante on this one, I really
liked the direction you went AND the ninjas are a
nice touch as well.
I can tell u were inspired by something to write
it like this. :-)
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June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You can really hear the dramatic musical background. (DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!!) Can't wait for the next chapter.
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May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #8...
Yes, indeed...this is definitely picking
up on the suspense AND you took an unexpected
turn in your storytelling, which is always good.
Always keep your readers guessing. :-)
Yes, indeed...this is definitely picking
up on the suspense AND you took an unexpected
turn in your storytelling, which is always good.
Always keep your readers guessing. :-)
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May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a awesome story. R u gonna make another several chapters?
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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it! More more MORE!