rate_review Reviews

I wanna know what the Soba incident is!!!!!

Oh. So well done! Tender, lovely, and even a little bittersweet. I loved it so much. I rarely review but I truly felt compelled to do so. The writing was beautiful and the love scene was heart wrenchingly tender. I especially love your exposition. Detailed without being excessively corny or drawn out. Thank you for writing this! It's close to a situation of mine so I definitely feared up some. (In a good way)

This was cute. I'd usually call for more lemon, but the little lemon you did give worked for the story. Other than that, fix the few grammar mistakes you have. Good work.