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If your taking request, heres one. Pikachu gets horny, and desides to rape May. She gets pregnant, and she is now used as a fuck toy used by him and his kids.

This was really good still just a tad rough around the edges but very close to perfect just take a bit more time and this will be the best human on pokemon fic there is.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

P.S. hope to see the blazekin yuri soon

Definitely getting there. In fact, if all this is you being rusty, I can't wait to see what happens once you hit your stride. Keep working at it, you have skill.

I think you were a bit rusty from the look of it but that's alright-you got better with the next chapter! ^^ I'm not much for yaoi but what you did with Erika/Gardenia/Doredia part and Joe/Pikachu scene...you did great in my opinion! ^^

And since you're accepting requests-I'd like to have mine heard, though I wouldn't mind if you decided to not to do it. ^^ It's the author's right after all. Anyway, for my request...well, actually, I have two of them, sorry...for the first request, Male!Arcanine/a girl (don't care who it was)/Male!Mightyena. And the second one, Male!Rapidash/a girl (again, don't care who it was).

Even if you chose to not to do them, I'll still await eagerly for your next installment! You did great job!

Definitely an interesting start.

As the two reviews already here seem to focus on het and yuri, here's a yaoi suggestion:

A male trainer with a male Charizard, possibly with a male Gallade or Lucario thrown in for a threesome?

this was alrigh but all the swearing took away from it it's alright to have som and makes sense consdering what was happing but to much just kinda of kills the mood anyway i have two request May and a female blazekin and a three way between Erika,Gardenia, and a Doredia.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

I agree it's rough around the edges, but no glaring problems that practice won't remedy.All in all, I'd say keep it up. As for requests, how about a guy and his female Pikachu?