rate_review Reviews

I've just been catching up on this fic and its really gone beyond expectation! keep at it!

Was also wondering, you accept OC's? During the process of reading i came up with a very Dark hybrid OC that might make things interesting.
If you're interested PM me either by my youtube or deviantart account; both under the same username PhoenixHelix.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

okay you are doing a great job at it so far but the whole story seems to only be very small what im trying to say is .....it need more bulk to the story and please dont stop so many writters have just been quitting lately ... including Slash Firestorm,,,why did he have to leave ever since he did the pokemon section here has slowly dwindled to a few loyal authers so please dont quit

great story i can't wait to see if you write more if not then i'll just have to do with re reading the chapter already up

i dont see alot of good preg storysif any at all but i enjoy this and cant wait for the next

Good story. Though I think you could have used a little more setup at the beginning maybe described the main character a little better because you did a good job with the pokemon but besides age I did not see much on her

I see where this is going, and I rather like that direction. Solid first chapter, no glaring problems, though the info dump at the beginning got a bit much when it came to details you could have put into the story itself. Looking forward to seeing some more.