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This is one of my alltime favourite kuroshitsuji/blackbutler fanfics ever. Your writing style is extremely understandable (must be from all the revisions when you check over your work) also, there are very few spelling or grammer mistakes to speak of. Keep up the great work, I'll definitly keep on reading ^^.

Wonderful! Chapter nineteen is by far my favorite chapter! It was just perfect. I love how Sebastian talks to Ciel even when the boy's unconscious. It's cute and also kind of funny in this dire situation. Didn't expect Carston to get free of Ambrose's control. What's going to happen to Ambrose now? Will Carston kill him, or will he regain control over the demon? Oh, and we get to hear what Sebastian thinks of Ciel. Very nice. The list made me think and it's a good description. Sebastian Prays?? Wow. Didn't see that one coming. But very poignant. Almost made me cry. I'm so glad they made it out. What a horrible place to end a chapter, though. Glad I've read the next one. As for chapter twenty, I could Feel Sebastian's relief when the vicar was able to save Ciel. So happy that Ciel is still himself! I couldn't imagine him any other way ... although, it would be rather interesting. So many unexpected actions! Not that it's a bad thing, I rather like it, and considering what has happened between them they are still very much in character. The banter in the driver's seat between them was fun to read. And then they held hands! So cute! I'm happy Ciel is starting to cave to Sebastian's affections. Hope their relationship continues to develope! Thanks so much for the updates, and sorry it took me a while to review. Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the good work.

Well done, Chapter 20.

I would be most interested to see how this goes along. Does Carsten come for revenge? Very excellent recovery for Ciel and Sebastian. Stay true to character, DGL, stay true! You've held the course amazingly!

On the one hand, I am surprised and maybe a little disappointed at how easy it was for Jarvis to releave Ciel of his stupor. On the other hand, I am overjoyed to see that dispite the current issue being solved, the story is not done!

.....YAAAAAY

The only other thing I have to say that I haven't already told you before is: just how do you keep your grammar and spelling so perfect over such long chapters? Most writers --including myself, when I do write-- seem to run out of self-correcting steam after a certain amount of continuous typing. Also, how to you ever manage to keep track of all the little details when there are multiple plot threads being made at once? My ears are open for any advice you may have for other writers because, clearly, you know what you're doing.

I am enjoying your story lots!, Sometimes I find the plot to be just a smidge slow, but I do love it all the same. I love how reading it is like watching an episode and not just "here lets have lots of smut!" I find Sebastian's fantasy's of Ceil to be the best, when he was sick in bed, I loved it. I cant wait for more, to know if Ceil will make it or not, I am dying to know! Please update soon and keep up the good work. This one is an absolute delight to read!

Your story is fabulous. I couldn't stop reading it. I least to me it was spellbinding. You have captured the characters perfectly and your style is excellent in shaping the tone of the Victorian era. Please, please continue it to what every conclusion it comes to, however long that may take. Thank you for all your work till now.

I have to say that I have been reading this story, and I look forward to every single update. I do alot of cosplay, and larp of Sebastian, and I my Ciel and I love this story. I also, must admit, that I cried to this latest chapter...keep up the good work.

I have been reading this story from the very beginning and I check every day for updates. This last chapter... with Ciel sacrificing himself for Sebastian was so sad. I can't wait to read what happens next, but for now I am going to shed a few tears. I love Sebastian showing that emotion when Ciel did what he did and I love how Ciel even though mad at Sebastian for his little bit of fun time seemed to realized he cared a bit more about Sebastian than to turn him into a mindless slave.

18:

OMG. Wow, we're really getting back to the occult roots of the series, aren't we? I'm flabbegasted that this is how the story has come to an end (maybe). What more is there? Ciel can't possibly survive in a demon world (where I assume they went). Will Ciel even survive the injuries? He's not exactly known for his robust health. Are you going to go back and end your story much the same way as the second series ended it?

Other notes:

Mama Easton is a cold-hearted menace, who wanted to go out in style.

Poor glasses, never to be given to the maid.

Loved the attentive Baldroy mention.

I like this chapter. There were elements that I had expected to happen and others that I hadn't. I am more intrigued by Carsten, now, in part because he has turned out to be something I did not expect. I am somewhat eager, though, to see the possibility of Ciel having two demons under his control. I must say, though, I completely was not expecting the dimensional warp there at the end! Also, nice job with the historical research, again.