rate_review Reviews

FANTASTIC story, hope this is expanded frequently. Love to see a Bianca/Black/White thing happen but that's just me.

If it continues, I'd love to see Chili, Cress, and Cilan gangbang Fennel. The only urk I have with this chapter is Fennel discribing what Might end up happening with White and Black's sex lives after they are done with her. It seems... disgusting, to be honest. Maybe the same sort of stuff goes on with the ranger story and the daycare story, but here it just seems very disgusting.

I'd love if you could get to the ranger story or the daycare story before another chapter is added here, but I know full well that it might be a difficult task for either, coming up with new things after so much has been done. Just expressing my hopes, no demands or expectations. Good luck

I'd love to see this continued, I'd prefer the current storyline. Love your writing, any position/kink you write is good for me.

Yay for Gen 5 stuff and a nice story. Fennel is beautiful... though sadly I don't think of the character, but the herb and veggie. Maybe you could use the Japanese character name instead? Just suggesting and not expecting you to follow the suggestion, but alas.

I'm glad you are thinking about making this a two parter and I look forward to more straight out sex in the next chapter. So good luck getting it all done. You are just such a fantastic author. Bravo!