rate_review Reviews

Haha the comment at the end was very true when you consider the Pokémon universe (yea I was thinking how strange it is but it happens all the time in the games and anime...). That said I think it’s well written and enjoyable. I do hope you add some conflict to their beliefs like in the games (not all trainers are evil). Thank you for writing and I’m looking forward to an update.

So far, I like it. I was really worried you were going to change how N always acts, but I still feel the same, young man with a good cause kind of feeling from this N as I do from the game N. I am sadly annoyed with the Pokemon name though. Litwit... really. I could go into an extended rant about how translators suck, but alas, not the time or place.

I'm looking forward to more, as there seems to be a fair bit of promise here for a continous peaceful-ish story, maybe a cutie romance between N and Felicia later on. Keep on working hard at it. Good luck!