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Erm, I'm not sure how to ask this without seeming patronizing...

I would like your permission to make use of the universe you have created, of intimate relationships with Pokemon you can understand and Companions as well. In plain English, I want to make a story with your ideas, with your permission, of course.

I just have a couple questions:
1) Is there any special method for choosing a Companion?
2) I would like to, again with permission, copy word-for-word the professor's speech near the beginning of chapter one. You did a wonderful job of detailing the specifics of this world.

Again, I apologize if i sound patronizing. If you did grant permission, I would not use any of your characters, and would indicate that you were the original authoress of this work and world. My story would be posted here on AFF (of course) and also on Sofurry, if permissible.

My email address is: aura.flare21@gmail.com
Reply when you get a free minute.
Thank you very much,
FlareLizard

This was rather entertaining. The lecture given by the professor at the beginning details the specifics of the world nicely. The Totodile's open-mouth, insert-foot moment (At least that's what I call them), had me in stitches. Whoops. Scald's reaction was...expected, but it was still funny. I'm certainly eager for more.
~FL

"You mean hilarity ensues?" No kidding. Hmm. I wonder where that Bidoof came from? A starter Pokemon with an egg move is certainly different, though Scald's explanation makes sense. "Scald, No one reads the manual." Again, No kidding. *laughs* Jello monster?! Run for your lives! Oh, wait...It's just a Zorua...Nevermind. :) The intimate scene was well done, and Scald showed his more thoughtful, considerate side. Dai becoming an Elite Four member? Now that's something I haven't seen before.
~FL

I've heard of running into people, but not literally! And it happens twice in one chapter! Aww, Adorable Eevee-morph. I wonder how long it will take before the Nidoran (Atamu, was it?) gets more...ahem... intimately acquainted with his new Trainer? By the way, in the first chapter, you indicated Dai's eye color was hazel when she was conversing with Scald, and now (Chapter three) her eyes are gray? Good work. Hope to see more soon.
~FL

Yay! New pokemon! And New Chapter!

I'm glad you posted another chapter and sorry you had crap fest of bad stuff happen to you.

I had an idea for another trainer by the way.

It can be male or female, but a trainer that calls themselves "Wraith" and only has ghost types and maybe a dark type or two is you think they fit. I was actually trying to make this trainer in my Pokemon Black game before it got stolen... :( Even transfer over a level 1 Ghastly named Cheshire for him to use.

Any way feel free to use this trainer as you see fit.

I'm very glad you're going to be continuing this! The battle scene was quite good, I thought; concise but descriptive. Practice makes perfect, team! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, whenever you have time to produce it.

This story is great! I love the idea of Pokemon trainers being able to understand their Pokemon.

Please write more!!!!!!!!!

I love the idea of this story and can not wait for more!

So far, so good. I like Dai, and Scald isn't too annoying so far. I like the explanations of the world, it shows what you are doing with the normal pokemon world and what you are changing. I like the Companion idea; it gets touched on, a little, in the main series, but it's nice to see you exploring the idea some. Also, I like the Elite Four angle; sure, everyone wants to be Champion, but you never hear about the others...

Also, nice choice in giving Dai's ass as her primary attribute. As a Dawn fan, I totally approve.

I'll be keeping an eye out, hope this goes somewhere good!

Awww, I love chapter 2. The incident with the mess hall made me laugh. Also, I think you did the sex scene very tastefully. With Dai's practical personality, it made sense that she got her first time out of the way, and Scald was so tender and sweet. :) It was adorable.

I'm glad that you updated and I definitely can't wait to see what happens next. I'm especially anxious to find out what other pokemon will join Dai's team.