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by lordkrakenknight

person un named
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I saw that your "my biggest problem is that 02 doesn't have a lot of girls" and I think that I have a solution.
Just say that the other DigiDestined from other seasons are just from other Counties. You could easly say that Zoe from season 4 is from Italy
person Christopher
schedule June 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Virtues? More like things that other people like to force on people to make it look like what those people are doing is 'wrong' when it has no effect on them at all.

Personally, I hope the 'virtues' lose out big time and are destroyed or at least humbled in this story.
schedule June 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
DarkAngemon? by any chance you used to be on Ryux Network Forums? And your other fics where did you had them? I mean the non adult ones that is ^^

Back to the newest chapter man, TK felt in the hormones game, he better pray he didn't got that girl pregnant o.o

About the semi sane relationship aka the one of Patamon and Gatomon I agree, just mindless sex and not at least a bit sane relationship would be boring, having one semi-sane relationship keeps things balanced ^^
schedule May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Blinks* do we know each other from somewhere else? is just that your username here is not very familiar to me ^^U

Anyhow back to the chapter, I really liked how you portrayed Patamon, never leaving Gatomon's side at all, I did full understand that any PataGato lovemaking couldn't be on this chapter, first because Gatomon is way too tired, and second because Patamon never could take such advantage of her even if she wanted to have sex with him right there and then, he knows she right now is on a very delicate state ^^

I really liked Patamon's words at the end of the chapter, "I will save you," he sure cares deeply about her ^^
schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens, I can't wait to see what happens next, but thats a given
person un named
schedule May 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice to have an update. I hope that Cartherine will make it to Tai's party. You did say she would be in the story. and Tai's party could use a blond
schedule May 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Do I smell some Patamon/Gatomon action here? I really hope for some ^^

It was really nice to see Gatomon going to Patamon for help, usually on lemon series she doesn't goes much to Patamon for anything ^^U

Really interesting fic :)
person un named
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Tai is going to have one big party. Should be lots of action there.
I hope that Ken and Yolie come to am understaing I did like that pairing
Also LadyDevimon looking like a Human I can see where this is headed
schedule May 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Do I need to say how great the chapter was? No I don't, keep up the good work
person un named
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Matt is starting to break free of the mind controll. Still I hope that he stays with Jun.
I like Taiora too much for Matt to get back with Sora

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