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Well we finally see that something bad is going down in the Digital World, probably because of this "Mind Changer" thing. Though I have to admit it's an effective idea. Get all the Destined screwing each other, then just traipse out while they are too screwed up to notice anything. Though I wonder what's going to go down when the effects get erased. I can expect an "OH MY GOD! I SLEPT WITH MY SISTER!" from Tai.

Grate as always I just hope for some TK and Kari action.

also one of the parings that I like is Izzy/Mimi

I also hope for a big orgy like in chapter 2 but with more of the new people

More anal, more incest, and more chapters please :-)

And so the plote thickens, this is really becoming one of my favorite stories, keep up the good work

Please, don't be too hard on Mimi in the next chapter, I'm a Joe/Mimi supporter and don't want him getting damaged goods...

Last part at the end made me laugh, can't wait to see whats next

Butterscotch sex kitten

I laughed so hard with that line, also Kari cumming up (parden the pun) and saying "Hi I'm a slut, fuck me" also made me laugh, keep up the good work

Interesting MC story, Not really my cup of tea, but I'm wondering how this will end. From your title, The Data TRAP, I have a feeling that this program is going to become a problem somewhere down the line. I'm hoping I'm right, and that things may go back to 'normal' (though Sora being with Tai still is fine in my book, specially if Matt still has Jun) maybe Davis will be the one to actually bring about that end, since he seems to be immune to illusions and mind controlling effects in the anime. Tell the truth it would be awesome if Davis didn't help Yolie's plans, sensing something is very wrong with the situation.

Anyway, I think I will continue to read this either way, it's intriguing, and I like how you make it where while their minds are being F***ed with, you try to let them all still be happy.

In case you are wondering why I like Mimi...well...growing up I hated the bitch, for always bitching about her problems...just thought it be funny to see her get her cum-uppance. Anyway good updates, can't wait for more.

Wow, Ihave to admit this one was definitly intreasting to read. Keep up the good work