rate_review Reviews

It isn't bad but I love how the girl's are different then what they are in the other stories I have read but there might be a few that are like this one. There were a few part's that I didn't like but that is about it. I would love to see Keitaro turn the table's on Haruka and make her beg for it while Shinobu is in the room with them. Just thinking about seeing Shinobu in the room with them would be good for me to start a part up but I'll leave that to you. Update when you can and I'll review the chapter for you and tell you what I think about it. But other then that one part that didn't like I love it. I can't wait to see what will happen next

It's always nice to see you update.

Loved every bit of it, contains all the signature parts I have come to expect from you.

Keitaro not being allowed to have sex with them was a nice touch, preventing it from essentially becoming a rewrite of your other story, while encouraging you to be more creative with how Keitaro interacts with the other girls. I would be interested in seeing this mechanic being explored more and maybe even become an integral part/recurring theme in the story.

Maybe Keitaro just might end up needing that chastity belt after all. :D

On a side note, would if be too much to ask if you could post whatever you have on that Motoko/Tsuruko/Keitaro pairing you mentioned working on a while back? Thanks!