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for Miss-fired Aim

by XSmokerz

person Azeira
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
There's a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but overall this was written extremely well. I like your writing style too! And the idea behind this is pretty awesome. Matt would be depressed if Mello ever left, and I always figured that he would be clingy to the blond, due to his past history before Wammy's. But the idea of him going to L...who did kind of cause Mello's leaving...different. But still believable.

I think I'll read more by you :)

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