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February 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Uuyy pobre ranma se pasaron de vivos con el!!!!
😱😱😰😰😰😂😂
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July 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is so darn painful.
Getting raped like that.
And then Akane.... will she make the right conclusions? ever?
...
I don't think so.
Well written,
Punchline goes right for the jaw.
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August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Like this one - I think you struck a near-perfect balance between descriptive and clinical detachement writing the acts, and I think it flowed very smoothly. More material in this vein would be deeply appreciated. Losing your input here would be a sad thing.
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June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Amusing set up. Ranma going to a fake gynecologist. Hehe.
Ending was brilliant! Akane will never believe he didn't do that on purpose. Though I doubt he would ever have recommended a gynecologist, as that would be the same as admitting he'd visited one.
Ending was brilliant! Akane will never believe he didn't do that on purpose. Though I doubt he would ever have recommended a gynecologist, as that would be the same as admitting he'd visited one.
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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. Well played.
I guess you needed a break from the drama and moodiness. Good outcome.
I suppose the only criticism I have is that the sexual description was lacking. But, as you say, I suppose too much emphasis on that would ruin the clinical decorum.
I was half expecting them to do an anal exam after her preliminary stretching. But I suppose expanding beyond the humiliation aspect of having a sexual toy up her ass would be pushing it.
I guess you needed a break from the drama and moodiness. Good outcome.
I suppose the only criticism I have is that the sexual description was lacking. But, as you say, I suppose too much emphasis on that would ruin the clinical decorum.
I was half expecting them to do an anal exam after her preliminary stretching. But I suppose expanding beyond the humiliation aspect of having a sexual toy up her ass would be pushing it.