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for He's Such a Coward He Can Laugh

by DarkFae

schedule June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like the characterization in this fic, the feeling and emotion really run strong, and the characters act in a way I can totally see. Also, I really see Shizuo as a sub and it seems like he's more often the dom just because of his strength, when I think that personality should determine who's on top, not their height of physical strength. I think you did a fantastic job stringing it all together into a backstory and making it stick so well, the erotic undertones were great, the sex quick and full of tension, very hot! My single and only complaint would be the constant 'preview of next chapter' which I suppose is sort of stylistic for an anime fic, but I feel just drained the whole. Also, I think this could have been made a lot less chapters, since it was kind of short for each chapter, but it worked fine. I felt that the ending was a little short, but also appropriate, so good work on that.
person Jacqui
schedule October 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally review fanfictions, but I truly felt I had to with this one. It was phenomenal. You perfectly captured the characters in a way few authors have been able to, you created a near mythical senario where two characters who hate each other would actually have sex, and I have finished reading this story and actually come out of it feeling like I know the characters a little better instead of the author's poor interpretation. I really hope you continue to write more stories as the quality of this fanfiction is beyond practically any I have read in a very long time, and by far the best of this fandom.
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. This is probably one of my favorite "Durarara!!" fan fics so far.
person Cheri
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yo! So, I just finished this fantastic story you've written and figured I'd drop by to say I really enjoyed reading! Your story was very well written and I thought it was extremely interesting! The characters were very in-character, as far as I was concerned. Overall, I really liked your take on Shizuo and Izaya's relationship!

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