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for Immortal

by zoni

person melancholy
schedule February 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm literally crying because of this fanfic. This was worse than Lelouch's death. It was excellent, but I did not want to feel this sad! Too much feeling to handle, I'm going to go watch happy anime now.
/cries
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I'm not usually a fan of Yaoi, but this story was f***ing amazing! Very well written, seriously.
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah...I'll admit it, I cried like a baby at the end. I really thought that you were going to let him pull through it all, I was wrong, oh so wrong. Great writing though and the detail was amazing.
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Horrible. I am so sad now for Bassy. I totally didn't see this end coming but I must say that I did love it. I laughed I cried. Amazing writing. Please keep up with it and please more Kuro!

Thanks so much. This one was a complete joy to read.

December
person Althydia
schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I didn't expect the end to be so sad... :'( But it was rather beautiful too.
Also, couldn't Ciel 'live on' in Sebastian, like Alois and his brother inside Hannah in the second season of Black Butler (the anime)? I thought it would be fitting that Sebastian and Ciel be together forever with their strong feelings for each other...
person barkere2
schedule July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I cried so much when i read the last chapter...I mean how sad...great writing. I would hate to loose my Ciel.
schedule July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oof. That was very well done, but very sad. It feels very true to the story that it ended that way, but I can't help but wish for an alternate happy ending. Very nicely done. I'm going to have to look at pictures of puppies or something before I go to bed now, or I'm going to have sad dreams.

Robin
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I seriously love this story and very much enjoy the way you write. You are so in tune with them it is like watching really good additions to the show! I cant wait for last chapter. Though I wish it wasn't ending I cant wait to see how it does! Thank you for writing!

December
person Althydia
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, I don't want Ciel to die! And just when Sebastian was his again too! I loved their reunion and I was glad that Sebastian was finally free of his secondary contract, and now this... I really hope that Ciel will be okay and that Sebastian can help. After all, he should be even more powerful now that he's just eaten, right?
I just found your story and read all chapters in one go I was so into it. I was really interested in your idea of Ciel being unable to age because Sebastian didn't complete the contract. It must have been a hard and lonely life for Ciel: he probably couldn't show himself for too long in the same place, or start a relationship with anyone because he looked like a kid who never grew up, and not knowing why Sebastian suddenly left too. He must be an adult in a child's body now. I dearly hope you'll continue the story after such an ending to the last chapter... Poor Ciel! And their feelings for each other with Sebastian were so nice to read about too.
I was also wondering: if Sebastian is hungry when he's with Ciel, can't he drink some of Ciel's blood from time to time to relieve the hunger a little, since his blood is also supposed to have a strong effect on demons (like tasting a bit of his soul for them)? And as a demon I suppose he wouldn't have fingerprints or DNA so it should be easier to hide from the police. Right?
Plus, will we see some of the old characters that can still be around, like the reapers and the Undertaker (well, technically he's part of the reapers, even though he's retired)? I'd also love to see Sebastian as a butler again, baking cakes for Ciel and helping him in his investigations (since Ciel seems to be still working for the British government), as well as protecting him of course. And I wonder if he's still crazy about cats?
Your original idea gives you so many plot opportunities, so I'd hate to see the story end too soon with Ciel's death. Please, don't kill him? But Sebastian is of course welcome to take revenge on the people who hurt his young master...
person Luimeril
schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
goodness! wonderful, amazing story. really sucked me into it. :d i got angry when i reached the last updated chapter, as i always do for stories that really draw me into them. i eagerly await the next update! poor Sebas-chan! he finally gets his young Master back, only to possibly lose him in an accident! i do believe heads will roll, should he find who did this. x: keep up the good work!

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