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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous. I loved it and hope you continue it, I'll be watching.
You had me thinking about this fic all day. Little bits of it bouncing around in my brain while I was trying to work; the temptation to access this story at work was unbelievable.
Keep up the good work!
You had me thinking about this fic all day. Little bits of it bouncing around in my brain while I was trying to work; the temptation to access this story at work was unbelievable.
Keep up the good work!
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June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like the plot you have so far, and the characterizations are done very well.
There were some spelling mistakes in the second chapter, and some sentences seemed like parts had been cut off so you might want to go over it to fix that, but other than that is was a nice update. (I approve of ghetto!Light XD)
There were some spelling mistakes in the second chapter, and some sentences seemed like parts had been cut off so you might want to go over it to fix that, but other than that is was a nice update. (I approve of ghetto!Light XD)