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July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8
Darn! Nodoka is one extreme bitch. I hope that one point Ranko will catch her mother in the act of masturbating (to a video of Ranko being spanked or something like that) or working as a dominatrix in a S&M studio ^_^. I wonder how long it will take until Ranko's spirit is completely broken, but Nodoka's method seems to be really effective. I doubt that one spanking will be enough to keep Ranko from masturbating again. She should just do it somewhere elese where no one will catch her.
Darn! Nodoka is one extreme bitch. I hope that one point Ranko will catch her mother in the act of masturbating (to a video of Ranko being spanked or something like that) or working as a dominatrix in a S&M studio ^_^. I wonder how long it will take until Ranko's spirit is completely broken, but Nodoka's method seems to be really effective. I doubt that one spanking will be enough to keep Ranko from masturbating again. She should just do it somewhere elese where no one will catch her.
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
Ouch. Nice to see Kodachi punished for her misdeeds for once. Hehe, I love Ranko's reaction to Kodachi's spanking. It would be nice if they could become friends, especially now that Ranma is gone. Maybe if Ranko told Kodachi that she's Ranma's sister things might improve between them.
The hint to the next chapter is probably Ranko masturbating to the image of a naked Kodachi, am I right? Yeah, Nodoka won't like that one bit. Still, it would be nice if Ranko fell in love with Kodachi and if they'd become lovers. I just hope that Nodoka's brainwashing won't have Ranko start liking boys. There are already more than enough female!Ranma/guy pairings. Yuti pairings are a lot more uncommon.
Ouch. Nice to see Kodachi punished for her misdeeds for once. Hehe, I love Ranko's reaction to Kodachi's spanking. It would be nice if they could become friends, especially now that Ranma is gone. Maybe if Ranko told Kodachi that she's Ranma's sister things might improve between them.
The hint to the next chapter is probably Ranko masturbating to the image of a naked Kodachi, am I right? Yeah, Nodoka won't like that one bit. Still, it would be nice if Ranko fell in love with Kodachi and if they'd become lovers. I just hope that Nodoka's brainwashing won't have Ranko start liking boys. There are already more than enough female!Ranma/guy pairings. Yuti pairings are a lot more uncommon.
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July 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Personally I hope Nodoka's training does do so, I admit without rancor, if onlybecause it can be hard to reconcile the "proper lady bit" with Yuri.
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July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6
You're evil, but honestly, I can't really feel for Ranma in this chapter. The rules are there for a reason after all. Can't wait to see how the first meeting with Kodachi will go.
I have a good idea how this will end. With Ranma becoming a masochist who's trying to get a spanking whenever possible.
You're evil, but honestly, I can't really feel for Ranma in this chapter. The rules are there for a reason after all. Can't wait to see how the first meeting with Kodachi will go.
I have a good idea how this will end. With Ranma becoming a masochist who's trying to get a spanking whenever possible.
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July 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ranko... Somehow I doubt her mother will just say "oh thats too bad dear" when she gets home, if she isnt sent with a note to take home, the difficulty she has sitting is still a dead giveaway.Might be interesting latter to see a day at school now that she has a better idea of whats expected of her see how pleased the teachers are
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July 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5
Daaaamn, Nodoka is either a total loon or an evil genius. She's trying to completely brainwash Ranma, isn't she? I'm sure she's only told Ranma that she could date girls to ease her into accepting her education. No way in hell will she ever agree to a lesbian relationship. I wouldn't be surprised if she'd already found a male suitor for Ranma. Probably Ryoga as I'm sure that in her twisted mind she's trying to find a guy who'll be able to handle Ranma and 'educate' her if she should ever be rebellious again.
Daaaamn, Nodoka is either a total loon or an evil genius. She's trying to completely brainwash Ranma, isn't she? I'm sure she's only told Ranma that she could date girls to ease her into accepting her education. No way in hell will she ever agree to a lesbian relationship. I wouldn't be surprised if she'd already found a male suitor for Ranma. Probably Ryoga as I'm sure that in her twisted mind she's trying to find a guy who'll be able to handle Ranma and 'educate' her if she should ever be rebellious again.
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very OOC and simplistic.
BUT....It's a fun little indulgence. So I'll keep reading it.
One request: Instead of referring to Ranma with masculine pronouns while she's a girl, use the words "she" and "her." It's a lot less confusing that way. It's really difficult reading when you have gender confusion throughout the whole fic.
Also, I see you hinting at a sapphic relationship between Ranma and Akane that would be endorsed by Nodoka. That would be especially OOC. With the whole "proper lady" angle, Nodoka would only want her dating men.
BUT....It's a fun little indulgence. So I'll keep reading it.
One request: Instead of referring to Ranma with masculine pronouns while she's a girl, use the words "she" and "her." It's a lot less confusing that way. It's really difficult reading when you have gender confusion throughout the whole fic.
Also, I see you hinting at a sapphic relationship between Ranma and Akane that would be endorsed by Nodoka. That would be especially OOC. With the whole "proper lady" angle, Nodoka would only want her dating men.
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June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree, I found the switching pronouns bit, even with the courtesy note, a bit offputting.
And the suggested relationship between ranko and akane I dont see nodoka approving of.
I wasnt sure how to say it before...
And the suggested relationship between ranko and akane I dont see nodoka approving of.
I wasnt sure how to say it before...
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June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Heh. I really doubt Ranma would be this accepting of the punishment.
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June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fun story. Curious to see where it goes.
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